Aww, this one made me tear up. :( Brilliantly written. Just a suggestion, though, maybe you should use page breaks since they make reading easier. :D

wow... that was good, but really sad :(

I bow before the awesomeness of this poem.

Wow that is very powerful.

wow thats deep and so true.

I like this poem because there is a dark truth to it. I can see you took some time into this! Good work!

Nice job.