Reviews for Suicide
Quiet Nights chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
" Its a gamble I'm not willing to take " I love the meaning of this poem.
burlap chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
Perfect and beautifully written.
J. D. Bennett chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
I love this. It flows great with nice rhythm. AND, you've accomplished something that only talented poets can do. Most poets, when writing of heartbreak and love and suicide and all of that, they end up making it sound overly emo with too many words and just downright depressing and BAD. This is great. Keep up the great work!
MatthewPaul chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
I've felt the same way before. I like this; it's honest. On one hand I feel that it's been said more poignantly, but then again, this is direct and to the point, and poetry, a form that has gotten out of control with horrible metaphor, could use some of that. I think it's a good little poem.

Also, thank you for your review. :)
Meggz chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Wow, this is really good. I love how you compared it to gambling and insanity because thats exactly how I feel about iy as well.
MonkeyNightWriter chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
short and simple and yet true and somewat deep
Amaury chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Nice job.

Very true. x:
studentofwords chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Short, but sweet.