im sorry but your story makes no sense wt so eva !

sweet story. I've never read something so simple, yet so beautiful. It didnt have some funky over complicated ploy-it was simply just a love storyy :)

u gotta love the angst,haha

the 'good guy' almost always suffer one-sided love.

nice story, off to read the sequel.

Beansz,

lemme just start with how amazingly awesome this story is.

I spent the last hour or so reading the ENTIRE story.

It's really, really good.

The songs-as-title thing was genious,

haha I know a lot of authors do that,

but you were listening to the actual songs as you wrote made it ten times better.

The only construction criticism thing I have to say is,

to go over the story and fix a few grammar things here and there.

Oh, and one more thing, in Chapter Seven: "Do It For Me Now", Ana has a dream about Ian?

Well, in the dream, she was calling Ian Jimmy instead.

Haha, that was the only thing that confused me, but then bugged me.

Sorry for taking up loads of space reviewing your story, and I'll be sure to check out your sequel.

I have an idea of who Ana's going to end up with...

I love your stories

can't wait tell that sequel!

hurry on the chapter 2.

you suck.

but thats positive feedback. im pissed because you left us with that. and i need to know what happens! which means i really really liked the story.

so im not being mean, just upset. because you need to finish this and not leave us with such a cliffhanger.

thank you!

(and you don't really suck)

That was an amazing story. I loved it. But I totally with Ana fell in love with Jimmy. Just Because I kinda have been in a situation like that. Sequel Please! What is it called?

I really liked how the story was written and how it went from the present to the past, going over memories. It was a little confusing trying to figure out which point of view each chapter was. It was nice that in the end Ian gave in to his feelings but it kind of sucked that no one ended up with her.. It was a good story : )

SEQUEL NOW .

:D

When you said 'don't kill me' I thought 'I sure am going to' but when I read a sequel was underway I changed my mind lol. Had a break from the internet and when I return I get a lovely completed story so thank you. I'll start the sequel, just so you know I'm rooting for Ian although Jimmy is 'better'.

i did not see that happening but you know what, i think it was really needed. i mean if they just ran to her and she picked one it would have been too predictable. this way it shows they really understood and respeted her enough to allow her a fresh start. i mean there is only so much pain a girl can take when even if the thing they wanted refused her repeatedly finally comes to her it just isnt enough too little too late'. i really cant wait to see what goes down in the sequel!

The ending seemed a tad rushed and cliffhanger-ish / - and that makes me look forward to the sequel )

Aww, no happy ending?:(

well i'll definitely be reading the sequel:D

good story;)

who in their right mind wouldn't want the sequel NOW?

whoot! i cant wait!