Reviews for The Golem's House
Ben Tramsami chapter 11 . 6/20/2014
Oh my gosh that was adorable! I'm so happy and warm right now!

I recently realized I've been leaving reviews on stories written years ago, and this seems to be no exception. I hope it doesn't annoy you to have someone discover your work so long after you wrote it. I'm really glad it was here for me to find, though. I really enjoyed reading this.

I hope you continue writing. I've become of fan of yours now. So I wish you large bouts of inspiration and writing time.

Thank you for the wonderful read!
InsanityAndBeyond chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
Loved this story, so sweet. A sequel would be brilliant, though it's unlikely four years later!
Guest chapter 11 . 4/20/2013
I don't like the fact that Jesse married that asshole, Not even caring that he tormented him for years posses me off even after they made up he was a douche about it Jesse? Really asshole?
miyabita yami chapter 11 . 1/9/2013
sweet
Guest chapter 11 . 1/2/2013
this was an awesome story! there should be a sequel... any who great job
flawedxuni chapter 11 . 6/2/2012
I really enjoyed this :) Allen and Darcayah were so cute! I'm glad his father wasn't ill, and that Bert and him have come to a truce of sorts. I don't like him but he had his moments towards the end where he wasn't so bad.

I wish you had more stories posted, too :( I hope you plan to post some one day?
Arya Yamamoto chapter 11 . 5/2/2012
Short but sweet. Simple country life with a dash of magic and romance and supernatural. Quaint!
Oshini chapter 11 . 1/18/2012
Aw, I really liked this story! Allen and Darcayah are so cute together :)
Dent chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Just wanted to say this was a very very good read. Thank you!
Fumiki chapter 11 . 9/1/2011
To be honest, I think The Golem's House ought to have a sequel about their life in Eguar. It should be interesting to discover more of Darcayah's personality, the couple's jelousy, more adult situation (lol I'm pervert) more characters, etc...

Overall though, I think this is a very entertaining story :) I'm not into Fantasy, but this one totally worth it. Darcayah is totally my favorite character, and Allen's awkwardness is so cute :)) I also like you writing style. It's easy to understand for someone who's not a native English speaker like me .

Thank you for writing such an amazing story. Hope to read more from you soon :D
Amarantis chapter 11 . 8/5/2011
This story is something that I enjoy reading more than once. It's short, to the point and the content is rich. I like how you made Bert authentic in that he's not best friends with Allen in the end and how his actions towards Allen in the beginning did not have a good and forgiveable reason behind them. My favorite scene is probably the one with the Cry. I just somehow like the concept of how the environment reacts to it and then the chase.
purplehost chapter 11 . 9/18/2010
Your version of a golem is a lot cuter than any other I've read about. I enjoyed reading this, to the point I forgot to review until I reached the end.
miraakira chapter 11 . 9/2/2010
troughly enjoyed it please tell mr there's a sequel?
Gargoyle chapter 11 . 7/4/2010
This was a very well writen and enjoyable story. I would love to read more stories by you. The world you have created is unique and the characters engaging. I like your golems. I'm so used to reading Terry Pratchetts version which are clay men created by wizards Oh So Long Ago. It was interesting to read about golems that were flesh and created by the earth and the Goddess.

Gargoyle
Llandogirl chapter 11 . 6/11/2010
M wonderful story loved the whole thing. My internet broke off contact with me right when I was getting to the last chapter and had to wait HOURS before I got to read it. It was worth it though. Very good :)
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