Im really enjoying this fic. cant wait for an update. x

I really like Allen, looking forward to more.

wonderful, incredibly imaginative. update soon, please!

I'm really loving it so far already. I'm surprised at that lack of reviews since it's pretty good.

i like it(:

Okay my favorite thing of out this was “… You can keep me pant-less, if you like.”

But “It is hard to fall asleep while one is hacking up their lungs, yes.” Darcayah replied neutrally." and "If I left you to die, your decaying body would have eventually poisoned the river and wildlife that depends on it.” are totally right behind it.

hahaha I laughed.

But the fantasy still is kind of weird for me. normally I read like.. I guess real lifeish stories or whatever they are called. (:

Aw this man is so adorable.

I can picture him perfectly in my mind.. which is probably different from how you picture him, but he is so adorably handsome in my head. c:

And haha "It was incredibly counterproductive" with a frown. I could just picture that and it was so adorable.

And the Fae thing isn't normally something I like, you know the whole.. fantasy thing but I'll give it a try. ;)

It took me a while to realize that the story has a fantasy/sci-fi feel to it... I think that kind of thing should be established from the very beginning. So, back in the prologue when the information about the woods came up, maybe you could elaborate more to really set the feel and let the readers realize that this is fantasy/sci-fi.

There was some stuff that was kind of confusing. I didn't really understand why the woods were so scary for Allen. I like that this is so fast-paced, though.