|Reviews for Triumph's Call|
| Korrarocks chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Hmmm...What happened to Zephyr? Why didn't you guys show a little bit of fighting or give us more idea do the war? Daemyn is missing for many chapter. Wyatt is hardly seen; hardly any interaction between the characters, no satisfactory development. Uncesessary plot lines and lots of plotholes.
The ideas for the plot was amazing but it needed a serious exploration you know!
A very deux ex machina ending, if you may!
| banana chapter 5 . 5/14/2012
Okay this is amazing. I love all your characters! The two guys are really mysterious and kaykay is soon sweet i can't stop reading haha. Anyways thanks for writing something this great
| Words chapter 12 . 2/27/2011
AAW! Kaylynn and Daemon are officially together, so cute! But Ze- what'shisface (I won't bother to spell his name cause he's such an ass) is turning out to be the bad-boy, not as in the cool 'hey look at that hot guy in the leather jacket' bad-boy, but as in 'you pin in him and I'll get the cuffs, you're going to juvy' type of bad boy. Kaylynn should like use her powers to burn him to a crisp in front of Amy and her siblings so thenshe'll have to explain what's going on to them then her mom won't have a reason to keep them from visiting there grandpa. I also feel that there should be more conflcit at school and at home before she goes off to start this whole war-adventure thing with the demons and angels and stuff. It just seems that she's not ready and it's just too earlly in the story to be sticking her nose in that. You should also try to stick some more info on this psyco-dude power-hungry Aeron guy. Likee where did he come from and how he got into power.
| Words chapter 9 . 2/27/2011
Wow... Kaylynn's mother's life sounds so sad! But, since not all angels are evil (just afew bitchy ones -) Kaylynn shouldn't judge all those other angels. EK! I wanna know what happens next ! _
| 12crazythomas chapter 22 . 9/26/2010
I loved this story. It was completely different and had a good amount of different genres in it to make the perfect balance. The characters were well-defined and the plot was overall excellant. Too bad you had to conclude the story though.
| Deeyah chapter 4 . 5/11/2010
Sorry you havn't gotten any reviews... for what its worth i am enjoying the story, its interesting n well written.
| WhoDoesn'tLoveAWriterLikeMe chapter 22 . 2/20/2010
aw... i loved this story and can't believe its over. sequel?
| Ghost n' Ghoul Girl chapter 22 . 1/16/2010
this was a very, very, VERY good story! on critique that i have, though, is this: i would have personally enjoyed the story much more if it had more details. And, also, Daemyn and she didn't have THAT much friction between them,, Yesn you coukd tell they were in love, but again, more datail would have been better. other than that, i absalutly LOVED this story. 8-)
| DesertShadowDragon chapter 22 . 1/12/2010
Congratulations on producing a fantastic story. It was extremely well written and a pleasure to read. Good luck with future stories.
| gingerkitty95 chapter 22 . 12/29/2009
i loved the story
can't say i have certain favourite parts as such
tho' it would've been nice to have more detail about kaylynn finding out about her dad and stuff
God Bless, Happy New Year, x
| Blackers chapter 6 . 12/26/2009
demonic angels? angelic demons? i luvs story twists! very ausoum idea indeed!
| Blackers chapter 5 . 12/26/2009
does that mean her mom is a demon and her dad was an angel? it sorta makes sense...meh its fiction. probably dosnt have to make sense
| Blackers chapter 4 . 12/26/2009
im just wondering, where was aimee when the guy (i forgot his name alredy) said “he killed a lot of my family”Im Just wondering. i also just feel that a statement like that should have provocked a more... idonno suprised, alarmed,panicked rresponse than “what the hell are you talking about”... unless she was realy THAT out of it.
lol. “*holds out cup* ”
| Blackers chapter 3 . 12/26/2009
short chapterabrupt clifhanger endme going: GRR!
| Blackers chapter 2 . 12/26/2009
i say it was a lot more eventfull. lots more stuff happened.(the heartthrobs are in. just what the doctor ordered)you should edit this though. loads wrong with spelling and diologe seemed a bit stiff. this chapter has better content, but the writing quality got messy. ima keep readin.