Reviews for Breakup
kyox88 chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
this poem is so powerful~~especially the last two lines, i love it so much!
As Seen On TV chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Nice work, really good imagery.

There's such a rush of confusion and emotions in moments like these, and to capture them with words is not done easily.

Good work, keep it up !
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
This is short but so powerful. You can tell there is deep

emotion behind each one of the words. Some amazing imagery was

used in this and I love these lines...

"the stains on my knees from falling;"

-Wow!

& "I hate you

for loving me so fiercely

and walking away."

-Great ending!

Amazing job with this! adding to my favorites

P.S. Thanks for the review! I'm going to be adding more like that

to it and make it a collection feel free to check it out! I do

love reviews :)