|Reviews for Breakup|
| kyox88 chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
this poem is so powerful~~especially the last two lines, i love it so much!
| As Seen On TV chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Nice work, really good imagery.
There's such a rush of confusion and emotions in moments like these, and to capture them with words is not done easily.
Good work, keep it up !
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
This is short but so powerful. You can tell there is deep
emotion behind each one of the words. Some amazing imagery was
used in this and I love these lines...
"the stains on my knees from falling;"
& "I hate you
for loving me so fiercely
and walking away."
Amazing job with this! adding to my favorites
P.S. Thanks for the review! I'm going to be adding more like that
to it and make it a collection feel free to check it out! I do
love reviews :)