Reviews for Second to the Right
IveGotSorcery chapter 7 . 10/30/2012
So I just finished chapter six. Well, chapter seven if you count the prologue. Since it's late for a school night, and I tend to not get enough sleep I figured I'd find a break point before I fleed to bed. I'll read the rest tomorrow and write another review then, but the story is most thrilling. It's a refreshing twist on the classic Peter Pan story. Don't get me wrong, I love the Peter Pan books and movies, but I feel as if it has a darker, and bigger idea to it than movies give. Or if not has, than should have. The big picture is just mind-blowing. I find that your story brings out the more serious parts of it, the magic that Neverland holds. Lastly, I love that you include the Indian tribes, it's a detail that some people could skip over, that there is history made in the story. I could be over analyzing everything, but either way I love it. I think your idea wholey is great, and it actually gave me an idea for a fanfiction I might work on. The idea I'm having is to close to the story to be it's own, so I may just publish it to ff. -Have I mentioned I love your story yet? (:
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
AWESOME! I love it already. :) My favorite part was:

'"Hannah, I'm Peter Pan," he hissed. "I don't need pixie dust to fly."'

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Prosaic.Fairytales chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Alright. I just wanna let you know this is jeivi_0509 from The Write Away. I really loved this story and I can't help but crave for more so yeah. Here I am. I've already commented there for the prologue and the first chapter.

P.S. I love love love this.
thats.the.beauty.of.it chapter 10 . 11/3/2009
I'm not gonna lie, I haven't been this excited for a story in a long time.
xxXNightsareDaysXxx chapter 10 . 11/1/2009
Aw...James!

Aw...at the end of the month? That's to long!

Good chap. and yea, too emotional for Jenn,I guess..
rainbowhead chapter 10 . 10/31/2009
yay you updated! i was waiting out for another update because this is the only story i'm really following because i havent found any other good ones :) so keep it up please!
icecreamislove chapter 4 . 10/18/2009
Col. Col. :D I'm a humongous Peter Pan fan. And I must say. This story is bomb. (:
Obsession Changes Things chapter 9 . 10/11/2009
This is so good! I stumbled upon it by accident and I am so glad that I did! And who cares if it is similair to the movie because your characters are not. You have added your onw twists and turns and it truly is your own work, keep it up and please. PLEASE! Update soon!
MDSolo chapter 9 . 9/30/2009
Whoo. Nice man, nice. That was such a good chapter. Update soon! :)
teardropsONroses chapter 9 . 9/28/2009
oh

this is soo good!

more please?
AmiableAngel chapter 9 . 9/28/2009
Aw! I really wanted him to kiss her! xD But at the same time I'm glad he didn't. It gives his character more depth. I'm falling more and more in love with your Peter Pan! x)

Please post the next chappie soon LovesickAuthor! I hope you got good grades! ) Lol I really should be studying and not reading stuff on fiction press... -_- But I couldn't help it! I had to read yours!
KelaBelle chapter 9 . 9/28/2009
aww such an adroable chapter, shows he did like her. the dancing bit kind of reminded me of a cin derella story when they danced the music came in my head, so i imagined it beautiful x
castiel89 chapter 9 . 9/28/2009
:'(

Poor Jennifer... It honestly seemed like Peter felt something...Maybe he's just scared to feel that way about another girl again? Hmm...

Gahh! Must. Read. Next. Chapter. ASAP! LOL

And I got a big kick out of Tink! "Homicidal maniac" haha perfect! I still love her though!
Zany As Hellfire chapter 9 . 9/28/2009
Aw. I feel bad for Peter, having to go through that cycle for the rest of his life. I find it interesting that he gets bored of things but the Lost Boys dont seem to. A state of mind maybe? I like Jennifer's flashback. Lost her two BFFs? Does her family not know? Just wondering. Haha. Cant wait for a continuation!
Nephilim Familiar chapter 9 . 9/28/2009
Absolutely love it, can't wait for more of this story, haven't had Peter Pan told in that way before.

Sincerely Nephilim Familiar
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