Reviews for turning the wheel ii
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
I like this, it's a great description of spring. Definitely not like ones I've read before. The word blooming is great because it's used differently than in other spring poems. Nice job.

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Erlkoenigin chapter 4 . 8/31/2009
Ich finde es (im wahrsten Sinne des Wortes) erfrischend, dass du an diesem heißen Tag (an dem mir wieder einmal die englischen Worte fehlen) Wintergedichte postest. Ich stelle mir das gerade alles plastisch vor: der verschrumpelte Regenbogen und die grauen Felder und ich muss sagen: ich bin beeindruckt!
LittleLoser.AndRoloLamperouge chapter 2 . 7/20/2009
wow...the imagery makes me smell the hay as it sways with the gentle wind...aah...I feel like sleeping...LOL..

-LittleLoser-
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
A “spring”- poem is a bit suprising in July, but I like it, especially the idea of “fairytale of old” as rumours of the fowers. What a poetic image!