AWWWWWW! Steal my heart why don't you?!

Ok first, he boyfriend should die. Second I feel like she is taking this all too well. Like it is normal, just because someone doesn't have anyone doesn't necessarily make them all accepting. I feel there should have been more build up to her getting comfortable or at least thinking of leaving or thinking about what he is. Her extreme acceptance causes the story to be quite unrealistic in its entirety.
I'm still interested, I just have to turn my head at a few things.

Dark, creative, interesting! Really loved it!

Your summary really doesn't do this story justice.

I passed up this story a few times before I decided to open it up and read it... I'm glad I did. You really did a good job here- you have a nice writing style, clean grammar, and good character development.

I enjoyed reading this story! Excellent work!

Uh...I...Am...Speechless... By far, the most amazing story ever. You should get this published. I am 100% serious. I would buy this book. I suck at reviewing, but this was just so incredible. I'm probably boosting your ego, but WOW.

Beautiful story, well done!

sound like phantom of the opera

I loved this story especially the ending

That story was so beautiful !

This was absolutely lovely to read and, I must say, that it was one of the best renditions of Beauty and the Beast that I have ever read – published or otherwise. Though there were times while I was reading your story where I asked myself ‘what the hell is going on’ and ‘why am I continuing to read it, these characters are annoying’, I am so ecstatic that I did finish because this really is amazing.

Your characters are slightly one dimensional at parts but you still find a way to give them more depth from the most subtle twist of words. It really is remarkable, too, that you were able to capture so much with really only two main character; Bluue and Adam only popping in for short intervals. It just goes to show that you have real talent for something like this.

Your story reminded me greatly of the television shows Dark Angel and the 80s Beauty and the Beast and I wonder if you have ever watched either. Still, there are enough differences that it is quite clear that you were not plagiarizing anything. If you haven’t seen either show, they might interest you. Your Dias character greatly mirrors the Vincent character from Beauty and the Beast in mannerisms and the way that he lives. If this sort of genre also interests you, there is a novel series written by several different authors thich might also interest you. It's called the Once Upon a Time novel series and the Beauty and the Beast retelling is called Belle by Cameron Dokey.

All in all, this was a truly great read, one that I am most happy that I did in fact take the time to read. Hopefully in the future you might re-write other well-known fairy tales and give them an urban update.

-bites lip, eyes water- AW

;o; OHSHIT

No! I hate you!

I love this story ! Thank you for sharing it :)

This is so ADORABLE. o: