Reviews for Poetic Mishap
zutAra101 chapter 7 . 11/13/2009
Nice chap, Sable seems to be a tad bit jealous.

Update please.

Your Heroin chapter 6 . 10/2/2009
Just wanted to point out that you may have made an oopsie. Towards the end you wrote "Kitten glared, letting Sable and me come in, locking the door back." Did you mean "Jennifer" instead of "Sable"?
Your Heroin chapter 4 . 7/24/2009
Well...fuck. I honestly did not see that coming and am slightly startled. Sable has a boyfriend? Gasp. I hate the feeling of jealousy with a passion. I got angry just reading that. :

I think its interesting you can pick chicks up that way, not that I'll ever do that. I don't willingly pick anyone up...girls dig me because I seem like a Feminazi white knight. Oh, ho, how wrong they are.
Your Heroin chapter 3 . 7/18/2009
Oh, wow, I've never heard of picking people up that way. Still, this girl seems interestin'.
zutAra101 chapter 2 . 7/15/2009
Nice chap, omg i love the car.

The characs' are developing nicely.

Can't wait for the next chap.


Say hello to the bunny!

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zutAra101 chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Nice intro; sounds interesting.

Please update.