Reviews for Misstep
Isca chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
I actually really liked this. The form is so refreshing and unique. The breakfoot/fallover/hidefromshame part was absolutely brilliant. I connected to that part quite strongly for some reason. You should write more pieces like this. :D
NothingMoreNothingLess chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
I am definitely able to relate to this. It's got a good beat to it, too. Nice write.