|Reviews for Weightless|
| Secrets chapter 18 . 10/8/2013
I loved ollie and her quirkiness! Especially her zoning out at random moments till someone gets her out of it! But that's probably cuz I do that and I have no hand-eye coordination ...or leg-eye coordination ( is there such a thing as leg-eye coordination? Ah well, you get my point) so basically my eye just does NOT agree with the rest of me :(
P.S loved your story! 333333
| Melly chapter 18 . 1/17/2013
This story was just charming,witty,romantic and just excellent. I laugh got misty eyed and aww in some cases. You really are a talented writer keep it up dear I jusy loved all of these characters all of them are relatable
| ALastGoodbye chapter 18 . 8/7/2011
This story was so AWESOME!
I really, really like it! I LOVE Olivia, she's soo hilarious, and reminds me a bit of myself.
Her and Matthew are so cute together, too! :)
Keep writing! :D
| Sparrowdaugther chapter 18 . 6/9/2011
THIS BOOK WAS AMAZING! That's all I can say because I am utterly speechless. Great job and thanks for being such a great writer!
| Sparrowdaugther chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
It's unusaul for me to review before I'm done with everyhting you've written but this book is HILARIOUS! So I had to review. This is AMAZING and I can't wait to finish reading. There were only a few spelling and grammatical errors, but otherwise it was fantastic
| There's-A-Star-In-My-Hand chapter 18 . 6/3/2011
i absolutley loved thiss!
you better write moree, i liike he way you ended this, really adorable and cute!
love youuu xxx
| maxineee chapter 18 . 3/18/2011
i enjoyed that immensely! i couldn't tell at all that she was going to fall in love with matty. i mean, it might have been obvious, but with aidan - oh! sighs. that was great. i loved it. livvie has got to be one of the greatest female characters i have ever read. dude. you did an awesome job writing this. i'd love to read more of your stuff sometime.
| PenmanshipSmitten88 chapter 4 . 2/11/2011
uh i was reading your story and I wondered why Matthew kept calling her Hamilton in this chapter 4.
Isn't Aiden's last name Hamilton and Olivia's Whitfield?
yeah that's it.
| Three'sACompany chapter 18 . 1/10/2011
Hey! I liked your story! It's funny and not so overly dramatic like the other love stories here are.. I mean its ridiculous the way the main character is being subjected to a lot of drama and tragedies and generally bad stuff dont you think? Anyway I liked your story. It's a very light read sort of type. I just wished you explained whatever happened to Aiden. He just completely disappeared! Good job though! Hope you write more funny stories!
| Ticah chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Random note but how does she have a last name like Whitfield? If she's supposedly Asian. And no, I'm not trying to be racist, I'm just trying to understand the logic behind your naming.
| Paige Cruz chapter 18 . 12/31/2010
Livvie is even more hilarious in her emails. :))
What a witty way to end 'Weightless' (haha, alliteration. i do believe that Livvie isn't the only one with a constant sugar high). I'll be missing Livvie, Lyss, Logan (wow, all L's!), Matthew, and the rest of the gang very dearly. :'D
now that that's off my back... i'll be looking forward to Case Xander!
oh, and happy last day of 2010! :D (it's the cool new way for saying 'happy new year,') XDD
over and out.
| The Imagination Addict chapter 17 . 12/30/2010
P.S. i LOVE ur email technique in ur epilogue!
| The Imagination Addict chapter 18 . 12/30/2010
awesome story! i totaly LOVE olivia! she's so freaking random! LOVED this!
| ixamxeverywhere chapter 18 . 12/28/2010
I started and completed this story today, and it was really good (:
funny, sweet, a bit of sarcasm here and there. Best of all: a little less unpredictable than almost everything else like this out there (AND without being straightout outrageous) so... props to you
| TheFateofaRose chapter 18 . 12/28/2010
I'm glad she got with Brian. This was a funny and sweet chapter. You should definitely do side stories. I'm wondering about what happened to Aidan as well. In any case, awesome job. If only I could write so well.