It's very well-written, though I would have preferred longer and less chapters. It was quite intimidating to see the amount of chapters before I started reading it. Nevertheless, you've done a great job, and I like how you managed to keep so many characters 'alive' in it. (And I mean that as in interesting and characters you actually remember.)

I never thought I'd finish reading this story, but I did. It truly was great.

Have I told you how much I like this story? lol I've read it twice now and I'm considering reading it again lol Rick and Pete are in my top five couples ( just sayin)

I thought the gay rights symbol was a pink triangle pointing down?

Your writing will read a lot more smoothly if you use contractions. Especially in internal and external dialogue. Unless it's a second language, everyone uses contractions.

I have reread this story from start to end and I still like it as much the second time as I liked it the first time. I can see little things I missed the first time in the story now. You did a great job on the story and I just wanted to tell you that again.

First let me say that I think is a wonderful story. However I really didnt like the ending. I think it was rushed and left alot of questions unanswered. I also think the relationship was rushed as Peter and Ric were only together for a week and you want me to believe that they just lived happly ever after? Then you have that Peter is very judgmental of others and I didnt like that part of his character. I enjoyed the story very much and dont want you to think that I didnt. However again I think it was rushed and could have been a little longer. Not in the number of chapters but in the story timing itself.

Wow, the number thingy is so complex. I should learn how to do that, but with English, Chinese, and French instead :D

OMG! I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS IS OVER ALREADY! SOOOOOOOO SAD!

Other then humans, dolphins and bonobos also have sex for pleasure :3

I've been in fanfiction for a while and basically read all the ones that were good (slash mostly) and then somehow found this site. I've gotta say, I love the original stuff just as much if not better than the fanfiction.

That being said, I just found this story and finished it last night after only about 3 days of reading. I loved it, Pete and Rick are so sweet and I wish the story wasn't over.

So hopefully when you get to a place you can write another one shot, I'd just like to throw in my vote for a future shot. I'd love to see these men in a few years.

Thanks for the ride. :-)

"When Luke and I spoke about his liking dark guys, I distinctly remember thinking that I didn't want to hear about him jerking off while thinking about my friends. My feelings in that regard have not changed." I laughed so hard after reading this. That moment was just awesome.

I've just spent the last 3 days reading this story in it's entirety! Gosh it's so very good! And when I read the authors note about a Vic and Luke story I got so excited! Now I best go see if you've posted anything on that! :)

I've just come across this story last night, and I love it.

I've been skipping through the chapters that I didn't even notice i've reached ch47.

it's amazing, but I though i should review it.

i have one comment to make:

you wrote in this chapter that Ish says to Rick 'You thought I was Arab, didn't you?'

Arab is a race, it should have said 'You thought I was Muslim, didn't you?' as Islam is the religion most people associate Arabs with, even though there is a large population of Christians and Jews among them.

There are no words to truly describe the way I feel, and how much this entire story has affected me so I will keep it simple; I love this so much. Your writing sucks me in, your talent is unbelievable, keep it up.

you should do ricks pov