|Reviews for A Sinner's Dream|
| ArekuKawaii chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
I don't like the lack of punctuation in this peice because it makes this hard to read and slightly distracting.
I liked the first line because it is unique and creative. 'The ink pours out from within my cavity' That makes me imagine someone writing or someone bleeding ink. It was very vivid.