Reviews for Discounted Eros
lookingwest chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
Loved these descriptions/similes/metaphors: "as immovable as the booming clouds"-because it's got such an epic feel to it, the use of the word booming really pops and is just the best word choice possible, "where shopping carts are pushed by invisible ghosts"-because it's such a great image, and I get that picture in my head of an empty cart rolling down a Wal-mart parking lot on a summer night at 3:00AM, kinda creepy. "the rainbow (sliced by electrical wires,) is just a vivid frown" because it executes the use of the aside parenthetical words, instead of overusing it like some poets, you tend to put it right where it needs to be-and as usual: BAM: perfection. :D

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Howle chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
Even though I have no more praise to give,I feel as though this masterpiece deserves a review. The stasis and stagnation in this is wonderful. You really have quite a selection, and you pieces don't cease to leave me breathless.