Reviews for Fallacies
collypollyy chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Well Ello! Its been too long since we talked. Grr someone reviewed before me...they shall pay! xD


Anyway, Im surpised this is about friendship. Dont get me wrong, I love it; it flows well, you can really tell this certian issue is bothering you. But it sounds more of a love poem to me. PSSH! I can have it completely wrong. I probably am. To me, its like you lost this person and now in a way you are wanting them back even though you dont.

Fave line:A lesson learned, a song we’ve heard

A common goal achieved

Comedic lies and alibis

That no one here believes

Nice poem! MOREE! psh I shouldnt be talking. I need more poetry!
C. M. Levy chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
It has got a good, smooth flow and a meaningful point :D