This story is wonderful! I loved the way you portrayed th characters, and you are the first Fictionpress author who has willingly written about Hephaestus. He deserves a happy ending, and yours is awesome. So please, continue.

I really enjoy this story. I've always been a Hephaestus fan.

keep up the good work.

Finaly, a decient story about Hephaestus! I am most impressed with the research you have done for this story. With greek mythology it's all about the research. So super job!

I like the spin you put on Hades, I like that he's the good guy to Zuse's "bad father/guy" It puts the gods into a perspective that not many think about.

I can't wait for your next chapter, so good luck!

~FireRam

I'm putting my money on Bree as the housewife that personifies Hera! They both have that regal quality to them! And wow, Aphrodite seems like the Paris Hilton of the anicent world. I hope she gets owned! I'm so rooting for Kabeiro and Hephaestus)

Teehee. I don't think Kabeiro will care that he's mussy, right, so they can go for another swim?

I really like this idea for a story of yours. It's very creative, well-written, and (I assume, since I don't know for sure, but you seem to know your stuff) well-researched. It's always nice to see a love story about someone imperfect. I know I'm reviewing on the first chapter instead of the next, but I have to get offline, so I can't read the next one. BUT I'm really interested in this story, so I can assure you that I will be reading it soon enough. And plus, reveiws are reviews and therefore wonderful.

I must say, I'm getting pretty excited for the rest of this story :D

Keep up the amazing work!

I must admit, I love how the layout of the story begins.

And I have to agree as well, Hephaestus is an interesting Greek god, no matter how you look at it. Too bad not much emphasis was placed on him.

Hope for an update soon :D

Aww...Poor Hephaestus...Nice proogue, though. It has potential to become a full-fledged story with a great plot. ;) Update soon please!

I like your Darkness story better, but that doesn't mean I don't like this story. it looks interesting so far and I will definitely be reading as you update!