Okay I've just read chapter 4 and I'm beginning to think that this main character is a little annoying the way she is so PESSIMISTIC. Usually I prefer reading stories about main characters like me which is why i like the humour genre generally... and I've been told to get my head out of the clouds and pay attention too many times to count. But I'll keep on reading the story because I have a feeling things are going to get better soon?

I went to get a cup of tea after reading this :) It was a great read, and I had a good laugh doing so.

loved it :)

Loved the details in your explanations of characters. I'm intrigued to find out more about this boy!

Oh yes, that definitely gave me a good laugh! I absolutely ADORE Chris's character. The English and their language are simply the best. I love the way Naomi speaks, even in her head, so beautifully (and hilariously) posh. Loved it!

Aw, this story was sweet. :) Loved it.

I tried to think of something witty to say about how much I loved this story, but I just couldn't. I really loved this and I can't tell you how many times I died out laughing!

Sincerely,

Aya Marie

Haha, I love how it's short and sweet. Very cute. It's very different from what I'm used to reading here on FP but I'm glad that I read it nonetheless.

This is the cutest story I have ever read :)

i had so much fun reading the story.

it was hilarious and original.i adore the characters!

love the ending. one might think that based on her personality she will be adamant in naming their relationship.

I can honestly say this is the most adorable story I've read in some time - I was either laughing hysterically or "aw"ing at any given moment. Cheers!

That was fast!

I love this story so much! Your writing style is just fantastic. I found myself enjoying reading this story.

This is the part where I really laughed:

Geoff was performing a strange dance in front of Carson which involved flapping his arms at his sides like a bird, jiggling his head from side to side while hopping from foot to foot, and breathlessly repeating "wanstarthuhwanstart?"

I could just imagine it!

Like I said, your writing style is fantastic. You're good with writing stories like this :) Comedy with romance.

Absolutely hilarious story

Aw! So cute! And FYI, I drink my tea with sugar! .

But this story is cute anyway :D

This story made me literally laugh out loud, not an easy feat.