Whoa, this is seriously creepy. Lmao I didn't mean about story. I actually had the same idea for a story! *gasp* that's so werid. Oh well, this story is pretty well written so far. You made some grammar mistakes but it's pretty well written. I would like to see longer chapters though this one was pretty short. If you need help with any ideas I have some which I will most likely never use now. Lol. Update soon! :D

Very interesting. I'd love to hear more. It seems original and creative. Keep up the great work.