Reviews for A Father
lenavis chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
nothing much to say here.

it was short sweet - - - pretty effective for a drabble.

plus, the examples you used were great. :D
Shepherd Nerd chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Oh wow, I really liked this-I sniffled at the end. Very sweet; I got a very good sense of the deep relationship between the girl and her father. My one suggestion is a small typo you have a few times in there, of the girl learning to cast her line; I think you wrote "caste" instead. :) Otherwise, just wow. Good job.
StickIntrinsic chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Ah this is love right here. Very nice feelings for a very nice work.
ranDUMM chapter 1 . 7/16/2009

Aw! Gorgeous! Really, I loved it! :) Well done.