Reviews for More Than A Friendship
Sailor-Sutty chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
Please write more! :D please...?
crazy girl 1901 chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
wow this was really good lol now i like both of your storyslol! btw your a really good writer!
Lynxaria chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
This was really good, I love the mystery and the way she is begging him to stay. It's clear that they really care for one another. Love it.
nevershoutrachel chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
I really like it so far,

I'm happy it started off like that.

I can't wait to read more.
st4rxx94 chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
Please continue! It's a really good story, the kind that sends chills down my back :)
Teenage Authoress chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
Hey yo, whoa! No stopping like that. You didn't even tell us their names! Give me more now!

One nit-picky thing (I'm a nit-picky person): The paragraphs are very choppy - not internally, but they are short and one-sentencers. Maybe some elaboration is in order... Just a thought. Or combining paragraphs together or something.

I do the same thing though. People are always telling me that every sentences does NOT need its own indent.

OH! Yay! Someone else gets ideas from dreams. Almost all my ideas come from dreams!