Reviews for Third Car's the Charm |
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![]() ![]() i loved this one so much great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LIKED IT ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story :) |
![]() ![]() I wish you would have made the girl a little less..icky. :( Okay story. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() very good... seriously, very good:) keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rip my hair out? On the contrary. I laughed maniacally along with the MC. But that's probably because I get the giggles after midnight. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha! this is awesome! i love it! i think it would make a great story, shes quite nerdy(which i love) most hot guy/geek stories have the girl being shy, quiet, smart but pretty, reads alot etc. not actually nerdy nerdy. if that makes sense. probably not. im sorry, its really late here and im just rambling. point is i really like these two. okay. bye. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you should make this a bit longer of a story..its already really good but it would be amazing if it were longer ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() cuuuute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a cute story...I especially loved the part where she kept reminding her mother about doing anything for her daughter's happiness before she proceeded to pelt his car with eggs. I literally laughed out loud at that part. So cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw its only a one shot *sniffle sniffle* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so absolutely adorable, I love it it:) It's so going on my favorite stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() you should update. This is really good and I'd love to know what you would come up with next on this. :) |