Reviews for But Can They Hear Me?
Dante's Disciple chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
I don't believe in God, but I'm from a Christian family, and can appreciate the fact that many people have faith.

It's good that people can feel fulfilled through their belief, you describe your love of God well and the rhyming is great (other than laugh/behalf, not sure that works).

Nice piece!
BlackRosesFreedom chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
I like this poem. It definatly rhymes which is a lot better than my blank verse poems. Good Job! Talk to you soon!


P.S. Im reading a lot of stories on Fictionpress recently! I have never done that before!
tiger002 chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
I really like this, and the message is so true. This really captures the message of wanting to serve God, but when we are with our friends, we care more about what they think then God. While I'd like to help you improve, I'm not a poetry expert. This is a great poem though. chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Oh my goodness! SO good! That was like a really beautiful, insightful prayer! I love this! I know i sound like a sappy wreck when i say that , but really, really, amazing. Whoa. I'm still in a little shock. wow. :)

with love,