|Reviews for Gibbous|
| InsanityAndBeyond chapter 1 . 8/13/2015
man, this is definitely your dark house.
I really really love this three shot. Sorry Im not reviewing individually my thoughts are all muddled into one. I read them (for the first time) ages ago but was waiting till I had time to review and do it justice. Which i cant so eh.
I LOVE each seperate story is so significant in their character building, and you truly learn more and more about them, as they learn more about each other. You do that in all your stories more successfully than any author I've read.
and gaaah, they're both so cute. I adore Holm, he's so sweet. And Simon, bless him.
I kinda really randomly liked the confession about their intimacy not going well, it's so unique for a romance, I've never come across it before. But then there's promise for the future since it's Simon's emotional withdrawal that was the problem.
Why do I feel really protective of Simon's werewolf state? Like that werewolf just needs a cuddle from Holm, even though he promised not to.
Something that's bugging me from this story is that house. I really really have the urge to do it up! These boys need to buy some colourful cushions and blankets and maybe some flowers from outside. And for heavens sake, buy some food apart from cold tinned food! Maybe splash some paint, i mean they're gonna keep going there.
The bit where Holm was talking about staying for the small moments where Simon carded his fingers through his hair etc were so heart warming and bitter sweet because of Simon's deep seated fear of being left again.
I'm really curious of that fight they had after their first time. It sounds interesting.
Oh and I loved hot Simon putting effort into his appearance.
The only time where I went huh? was when Holm's mum was setting him up with that flexible dude when she already knew he was with Simon.
God I have a feeling you're done with these two, but you only said you're 'maybe' done so I'll hold out hope for random one shots for these two.
I'd looveee to see their physical side develop and be hot. and just more of them, the intensity behind their emotions are so apparent through every word. And maybe to see more of a timeskip, cause this is your only story i think that sticks to the more of the beginning of their relationship, and i adore the fact most of your stories time skip to show maturity in a relationship. although there was a years gap in this wasn't there, even though it wasn't when they were together.
anyway, thankyou as ever for wonderful amazing reads. hope everythings going well for you.
sidenote, I wanted to visit your patreon site to view the details but the link you;ve put just redirects us back to your profile page.
| Mandy S. Bryan chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
This has been a really great story set.
| RiotFalling chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Fantastic, all of it. Simply fantastic.
| C3PO chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
i really do love these two
and wow just when it finally looks like Simon might care almost as much Holm seems to care for him and then the story ends right before he might actually confirm it. I'd be lying if i said that WASN'T the absolute perfect place to end it off. that was just really very amazing. it'd be nice if there was more from these two excluding the prequel with hatchback guy; but even if there wasn't I'd be pretty content if it just ended off here. it was just perfect
| falling-into-fate chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Oh my GOD I love this couple. The whole plot too. Everything. I love Simon's personality, how he can act so argumentative yet still be able to show his affection for Holm. :') Same way for Holm as well. These guys are seriously growing on me, and you should definitely write more! I really want to read a lemon between these guys. xD You teased all of us with "Silver Bullet". I seriously thought that that was the fic when they were going to do it. You owe it to all of your fans now you know. ;) So please? I was so happy to find out that you're an active writer on FP, so hopefully it will happen. :') Wonderful series!
| Muffy the Dough Slayer chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
I seriously cannot wait for more with these two. They are so adorable together, and now that Simon seems more into it...awesome! Maybe you could have more with wolf Simon and Holm :D It's interesting how he doesn't hurt Holm. Maybe Holm could video tape it somehow and show it to Simon as proof, lol. Anyway, I absolutely adore these two, they are my fav couple from your stories, haha. Vaan and Saul are the second fav, of course :D and then Keyd and Alan (I love Keyd!). I'm rambling...so I shall stop now. But anyway, yeah, I want more with these two, please!
| Averick chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
I FREAKING LOVE THESE TWO! SO SWEET AND ANGSTY WHEN SIMON WAS ALL "I THOUGHT I KILLED YOU" haha! LOVE IT SO MUCH! You hafta do more with these two, I mean it! They could have so many stories!
| The Moon Is My Sun chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
| spenny chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
I like it. It's good. Maybe a couple times their interaction struck me as unrealistic (i know, someone reading this is saying, "Uh...werewolf? And you're worried about unrealistic.") but for the most part, I like it.
It's not hard to tell when something's forced or perhaps the product of some pre-teen whose only experience of interesting interaction is Hollywood media.
I think your perception and portrayal of what guys want to hear from their boyfriends is pretty accurate. Now, as for whether your readers find themselves outgoing enough to engage in repartee with perfect strangers or kissing graveyard statues only to find them coming to life, that's a different matter. but it's fiction. it's the fantasy. and you write it well.
| D.H. L'Orange chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
didn't realize this was around. always enjoy reading about these two :D
| HentaiZaru chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Loved it, of course. The only thing I don't understand is how Holm passes out right after dangerous situations like nothing. It doesn't matter though, it's still awesome.
| Tinyyellowboxes chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
AW. I'm so glad things ended up working for Simon and Holm. They're such a cute REALISTIC couple. I just wanted them to work.
| Amopet4 chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
ahh this is ace. :)
| theyStoleMyPenName chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
very, very sweet, despite being so harsh:D
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
that was great.