Reviews for Control |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, this is one of the first fictionpress stories i have read that i thoroughly enjoy, please continue! x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this story I enjoy it ! |
![]() ![]() Please hurry up and write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like how this story is progressing :) Most of the descriptions of actions and dialogue is good, but I think if you could add a bit more details it would make your story feel fuller and more in-depth. I'm anxious for your next update :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes I found it here too. Hope you update more quickly. Love this story. :) |
![]() ![]() love this story, please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is awesome! I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() i absolutly love this book i ant wait for you to update! |
![]() ![]() i love this story i cannot wait for you to update! please update soon :) |
![]() ![]() i love this story and i cant wait to read teh next chapter! i love locke he's so sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story, hope another chapter is coming soon :D |
![]() ![]() :' ( HOPE x LOCKE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad they're bonding more. Creat chapter. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() aw so sweet I cant wait 4 the next one update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Hope! Please update soon! |