Reviews for Control
Nahai Burbank chapter 15 . 1/15/2010
i officially adore u lol THANKs for the update!
Cooper Pierce chapter 15 . 1/14/2010
Hoping to read more!
Mae Liz chapter 15 . 1/14/2010
I like how you changed point of view to add suspense, that is a great addition to any story! I like where the story is going so far, and I hope that it continues to be great!
truth17 chapter 14 . 1/2/2010
UH OH...I hope someone gets there in time!

WOW...she's a hybrid, I thought so,but I wonder if being a hybrid will come with "side effects"?
Nahai Burbank chapter 14 . 1/2/2010
I am going to beg and plead for you to update!
Bittersweet Lover chapter 14 . 12/31/2009
broken-pixie chapter 14 . 12/31/2009
Uh-oh. So Jon really is her father. Great chapter. Update!
Mae Liz chapter 14 . 12/30/2009
Those twins are an experiment in creep and creepier... I don't like them at all! They are well written villains though, I'd hate to be Hope at that moment. Then again, it will be worse for them once Locke gets involved. I can't imagine they will live through the experience.

Hope being half and half was a bit of a shock to me, but it was a good shock. I sort of figured something was up with it when we found out her mother was a slave though.

Good work! Keep it up!
Kathey27 chapter 14 . 12/30/2009
! I knew it _ lol. This was awesome and please let Lock save her!
mel-mayr chapter 14 . 12/30/2009
jee thanks leave me with a cliff hanger lol. please update SON
Stormie-Daze chapter 14 . 12/30/2009
OMG! nuu i need more you evil evil person!
Twitdit chapter 14 . 12/30/2009
Those twins are perverts! Oh My GOSHH! UPDATE SONN! i cant wait to find out what happens... im gonna be really mad if Locke doesn't come save her in time! Great chapter! It's totally got me on edge! :)
Chocorange888 chapter 14 . 12/30/2009
You have finally updated! I thought you disappeared lol. I'm glad the secret's finally out. Those twins are so sadistic, it really creeps me out, lets hope she'll be saved. Thanks for the chapter, happy New Year!
Mae Liz chapter 13 . 11/21/2009
Interesting choice of names, they ring a bell from somewhere but I am just not sure where. Great Chapter. If homes tell something about the person then I wonder what all she takes as unimportant other than the party. Then again, I have to wonder if the twins didn't just kill her. I don't think you ever said if the newly turned vampires are weak or strong, or maybe my imagination is just running away with me.
zaragona chapter 9 . 11/19/2009
I love this story! The characters are fantastic, and the plot is very engaging. I was trying to wait until the end to review, but I had to agree with Locke about Hugo 110%.

The only criticism for the whole story is that it moves a bit fast in places. I know that after criticizing Hugo's work it is hypercritical to say this, but there are a few places especially with Hop and Locke's interactions where it seems more could be described.

I cannot wait to finish reading though!
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