| Reviews for Control |
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   NovelS chapter 13 . 11/19/2009 :) |
| Twitdit chapter 13 . 11/19/2009 Ahaha ohh man i just LOVE Locke and Hope's relationship! It's just so darn cute! Great chapter! More soon please! :) |
| mel-mayr chapter 13 . 11/19/2009 thanks leave me guessing what happened to selena lol. i cant wait until you update again! |
| StormieDaze chapter 13 . 11/18/2009 I want more plus the romulus and remus gesture are you referring some ties to werewolfism. |
| Chocorange888 chapter 13 . 11/18/2009 Thanks for the chapter, Romulus and Remus? As in when Rome started, fitting names for people who have just gained power ;) |
| Kathey27 chapter 12 . 11/18/2009 IM SO EXCITED! Lol, : ) this was awesome & I love where the story is going _ |
| Chocorange888 chapter 12 . 11/13/2009 This story is greatly interesting and I have really enjoyed reading it thus far. But I do think that their relationship is moving slightly fast. Please keep up the good work. Thank you and I hope you will update soon. |
| mel-mayr chapter 12 . 11/11/2009 great! |
| Jess chapter 12 . 11/11/2009 This story is great but listen you've already incoporated alot of awful events where rape has taken place. So how about being a good author and a good human being and instead of creating conflict by having Hope cornered and raped at the party (which I know ur going to do). You instead have Locke come in and save the day BEFORE she's raped by that evil bitch selena and those stupid twins, that way ur a good person and a good author b/c u still have good conflict, fight scene or whatever. I hope u update soon (unless u planing on having Hope raped then I hope you never update again) |
| Twitdit chapter 12 . 11/10/2009 Awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D UPDATE SON! :):):) |
| NovelS chapter 12 . 11/10/2009 i love this story...update soon! |
| Mae Liz chapter 12 . 11/10/2009 Nice chapter! I liked the detail with Lars, I do hope that he remains in the story since you seem to have put a decent amount of work into making him a personalized character. I also really like the detail put into making Locke a very real character, complete with turn ons and family! Nice to humans seems to run in the family. Maybe I missed it, was there a description of Hope's dress? I can understand suspense if I just missed the whole idea of it in there though. I'm a little scatterbrained today, so I may have just missed the whole description of the dress. |
| broken-pixie chapter 12 . 11/10/2009 great chapter! |
| MasonJ chapter 12 . 11/10/2009 Great new chap i cant wait til u update next |
| jamimi04 chapter 11 . 10/5/2009 I really enjoyed your story so far I hope you finish it. |