Reviews for Control |
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![]() ![]() Wow, what an imagination. I like your story, it is quite unique. Can't wait to see what happens now that we know she is a half-vampire. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! How is this possible! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.O omg! jon's mate was Hope's mother! THATS CRAZY! i love it! Potst the next chapter SOON! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hopes mother? wow wasn't expecting that... what next? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting turn of events. I hope to see an update soon (even though it's midterm and I'm slow at reading them)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG that's amazing I cant wait 4 the next chapter update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I love how this is progressing. Is Jon Hope's father, maybe? It would just make a lot of sense, you know. Anyway, loved it! Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() once again, a wonderful chapter! i dont understand though, was the last part in the past? |
![]() ![]() OMG! I knew it...! (more?) Jon is her daddy! OMG... Whats Jon gunna do to Locke! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thats sad so is jon her dad? |
![]() ![]() ![]() There could be so much more to your chapters, they seem cut off at the ends of each of them. Try to expand on them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah! i just love this story..i think it needs a little more drama/action going though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! I like this side of vampire stories, where they can be the good guys, if they chose to be. Good work so far! Keep it up! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() Aww I liked though I want to see what Selena is going to do and those other two guys, her pets yeah... hm but Locke and Hope remind me of an elderly couple. lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() great job on this one |