Reviews for Control
bonghi chapter 11 . 10/4/2009
Wow, what an imagination. I like your story, it is quite unique. Can't wait to see what happens now that we know she is a half-vampire.
Kathey27 chapter 11 . 10/3/2009
OMG! How is this possible! Update soon!
Twitdit chapter 11 . 10/3/2009
O.O omg! jon's mate was Hope's mother! THATS CRAZY! i love it! Potst the next chapter SOON! :)
Bella-lynn chapter 11 . 10/2/2009
hopes mother? wow wasn't expecting that... what next?
Mae Liz chapter 11 . 9/30/2009
Interesting turn of events. I hope to see an update soon (even though it's midterm and I'm slow at reading them)!
MasonJ chapter 11 . 9/29/2009
OMG that's amazing I cant wait 4 the next chapter update soon
broken-pixie chapter 11 . 9/29/2009
Great chapter! I love how this is progressing. Is Jon Hope's father, maybe? It would just make a lot of sense, you know. Anyway, loved it! Update soon.
NovelS chapter 11 . 9/29/2009
once again, a wonderful chapter! i dont understand though, was the last part in the past?
Stormie daze chapter 11 . 9/29/2009
OMG! I knew it...! (more?)

Jon is her daddy! OMG... Whats Jon gunna do to Locke!
midnight84118 chapter 11 . 9/29/2009
thats sad so is jon her dad?
R0CKER chapter 10 . 9/21/2009
There could be so much more to your chapters, they seem cut off at the ends of each of them. Try to expand on them.
NovelS chapter 10 . 9/21/2009
ah! i just love this story..i think it needs a little more drama/action going though!
Mae Liz chapter 10 . 9/21/2009
Cute! I like this side of vampire stories, where they can be the good guys, if they chose to be. Good work so far! Keep it up! Update soon!
Stormie-Daze chapter 10 . 9/21/2009
Aww I liked though I want to see what Selena is going to do and those other two guys, her pets yeah... hm but Locke and Hope remind me of an elderly couple. lol
midnight84118 chapter 10 . 9/21/2009
great job on this one
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