|Reviews for Control|
| bonghi chapter 11 . 10/4/2009
Wow, what an imagination. I like your story, it is quite unique. Can't wait to see what happens now that we know she is a half-vampire.
| Kathey27 chapter 11 . 10/3/2009
OMG! How is this possible! Update soon!
| Twitdit chapter 11 . 10/3/2009
O.O omg! jon's mate was Hope's mother! THATS CRAZY! i love it! Potst the next chapter SOON! :)
| Bella-lynn chapter 11 . 10/2/2009
hopes mother? wow wasn't expecting that... what next?
| Mae Liz chapter 11 . 9/30/2009
Interesting turn of events. I hope to see an update soon (even though it's midterm and I'm slow at reading them)!
| MasonJ chapter 11 . 9/29/2009
OMG that's amazing I cant wait 4 the next chapter update soon
| broken-pixie chapter 11 . 9/29/2009
Great chapter! I love how this is progressing. Is Jon Hope's father, maybe? It would just make a lot of sense, you know. Anyway, loved it! Update soon.
| NovelS chapter 11 . 9/29/2009
once again, a wonderful chapter! i dont understand though, was the last part in the past?
| Stormie daze chapter 11 . 9/29/2009
OMG! I knew it...! (more?)
Jon is her daddy! OMG... Whats Jon gunna do to Locke!
| midnight84118 chapter 11 . 9/29/2009
thats sad so is jon her dad?
| R0CKER chapter 10 . 9/21/2009
There could be so much more to your chapters, they seem cut off at the ends of each of them. Try to expand on them.
| NovelS chapter 10 . 9/21/2009
ah! i just love this story..i think it needs a little more drama/action going though!
| Mae Liz chapter 10 . 9/21/2009
Cute! I like this side of vampire stories, where they can be the good guys, if they chose to be. Good work so far! Keep it up! Update soon!
| Stormie-Daze chapter 10 . 9/21/2009
Aww I liked though I want to see what Selena is going to do and those other two guys, her pets yeah... hm but Locke and Hope remind me of an elderly couple. lol
| midnight84118 chapter 10 . 9/21/2009
great job on this one