Reviews for Control |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! i love the story so far! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! i really like it:) update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the direction this is going. It would be hilarious to see her reaction when he says "so.. uh... pregnancy is the way out of this." I'd imagine she'd flip out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great job i fell for hope and locke |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOPE x LOCKE SITTING IN A TREE! Lol : ) they're cute together & I can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw : ) I'm already falling for them too : ) they're cute together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Locke was really sweet here and I liked how Hope seems to already trust him : ). |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can smell the romance between Locke and Hope coming : ). I'm glad that you explained Hope some more here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this beginning of this chapter. It created some mystery and I liked how you explained what was going on as the chapter went along. I also like Locke's character a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the innocent beginning with Hope and her mom : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() great job is Hope a half vampire? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohh i like this one!keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story just gets better! Good work on the updates, hope to see more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon, I want to know what happens! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great job whats going to happen next |