OMG this is one of my favorite stories on this website! I absolutely love the plot and the progression of the relationship between Alex and Matt!

Nice chap; yeah, first chapters can start out pretty slow, but this was nice - I like that the action already starts by the end of the chapter.

Matt totally could've just called her Alexa, but whatevs, and I can't believe that Matt and Alex spent so much time arguing semantics lol, but the part with the fireworks was so cute and descriptive enough to be awesome :) Strangely, I actually understand what Alex means when she talks about finally loneliness when watching fireworks; I get that feeling at night when I'm looking at thousands of city lights out a window, but there's always some excitement and longing mixed in there...

Well done! :)

This was absolutely adorable. I love the progression of romance between Matt and Alex, and I found it to be refreshingly believable. I need to go hug the world now.

that was amazing! i love the flow of the story and the little conflicts and the sweet gestures of affections. it makes me want to hbe in love with my bestfriend's older brother!

This story is entirely too under-appreciated. I actually first read it several months ago, but it popped into my head today and I just had to read it again. Took me awhile to find it, too, because I was dumb and didn't bookmark it.

At any rate, I love the flow of this story. Even though the characters did everything "backward", I still feel like this is one of the most realistically portrayed romances on FictionPress. It also helps that your characters are all adults instead of sixteen year-olds professing their undying love for one another.

I really hope to see more from you )

This is a wonderful story, and it definitely deserves more reviewers. In my Community it goes!

Keep writing!

- J

I. Loved. It. It's as simple as that.

Like LiKE LIKE LIKE LIKe! Aka LOVe this story

This was ADORABLE! it was pretty awsome! I whished this was longer but is pretty amazing!

This was great. I really enjoyed the fact that neither of them was perfect or super beautiful, just right for the other.

I love this story. I just finished reading it and think the slow romance is amazing. It didn't feel like they were going too slow and I really like how you took the time to make them fall in love. :)

They're witty and so cute. It's adorable.

Ah, hazel eyes. The downfall to us all. One of the things I hope for in stories is when the dialogue is important. I don't know if that makes a lot of sense. What I mean is that I don't like reading dialogue built on empty words and stuff that is unnecessary. All of your dialogue is important! It's only there if it should be. This is awesome and wonderful.

Really? You hate the first chapter? Just read it and I'm really liking it so far. I really like the balance between detail and dialogue. It's very easy to visualize the scene as it unfolds and by the end I'm drawn in and want to know more. Since this is completed, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in the next 9 chapters. Yay!

Aw. It's so sweet.