I really liked this story. Mostly you just read fics with werewolves, it was nice to see a different animal, and how you changed the character to suit the characteristics of a panther, what with the purring and stuff. However, all in all I think this story can't really be called a great one. There's a major flaw with all the characters - they have none! Cole is just all-round perfect, he can cook, he's a bit possessive, looks fantastic, has paranormal links with the perks that come along with that(enhanced smell etc.), great in bed, sweet, seems smart, and i could go on. It really makes him and 'Mouse' quite boring. I think you should consider rewriting some parts of this story and including scene or two where the couple have a fight about something they dislike in the other, or something like that. It just seems too standard and incredibly unrealistic.

Sorry if you find this harsh! I really only want to help. I'd be interested to read Black Heart if you ever write it, sounds interesting.

I really enjoyed this book. It was very creative and very interesting. I like the way you formed your characters. You are a very talented writer. I can not wait until you start posting Black Heart. :)

Love your story, although maybe it could've ended with more of a BANG? But I quite like this one if you can't be bothered to change it. It's been a pleasure reading your story. )

oh, drama. I just thought that this was a very fast and short chapter that could've used a slower pace and have multiple descriptions. I think that there should have been a bigger or longer struggle with Cole and Kincaid since this seems like an important and exciting part of the story, there could've been more suspense in it, especially when Vic realizes her feelings for Cole.

Apart from this it was a pretty good chapter.

"RAWR!" Means I love you in were-panther. )

cute chapter

Kincaid had to come in and ruin the moment didn't he?... Cole is adorable, but I can't wait to figure out what's going to happen

My birthday is on the 16th of August. huh, what a coincidence... although he's a couple of years older than me...;D

lol. That last line made me laugh... at least she did it with a smokin' hot cat. lol.

steamy. Mister sounds adorable!

oh! drama, drama, drama! How cute is Cole? love your story

How mysterious... I like where this is going. I like the pace that you're going at too. not too fast, but not too slow that it's boring. Cudos to you :D

nom, nom, nom, nom, nom, nom, nom... wonder WHEN she's going to feed that appetite of hers. onwards! to the next chappie!

*sigh* he sounds absolutely drool worthy... ... ahem!

I like your characters so far, and even though it's the start of the story your character building is awesome!

oh! exciting. Love the character so far.