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![]() ![]() ![]() ...I wouldn't be that happy either having to stand up at 6.46 in the morning to have a boss like that...O.o ... Anyway, I like it Am curious about that Nick person, and I wonder what type of office they're working at? It isn't that important I think, but maybe you could explain a bit further what those 5 employees do... At the description of Nick when Jack first sees him, I think you accidentally called him a her, but that's just me nagging XD I really like the story so far ne! Hope you'll update soon! Huggles! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like it, go on... |
![]() ![]() ![]() VERY interesting start, but I feel like you could've written a lot more for the first chapter. It definitely sucked me in, though. |