Reviews for 31 Days
camikaza chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
...I wouldn't be that happy either having to stand up at 6.46 in the morning to have a boss like that...O.o

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Anyway, I like it Am curious about that Nick person, and I wonder what type of office they're working at? It isn't that important I think, but maybe you could explain a bit further what those 5 employees do...

At the description of Nick when Jack first sees him, I think you accidentally called him a her, but that's just me nagging XD

I really like the story so far ne! Hope you'll update soon!

Huggles!
infinite silence chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
i like it!
camikaza chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
I like it, go on...
Mercedes Woods chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
VERY interesting start, but I feel like you could've written a lot more for the first chapter. It definitely sucked me in, though.
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