Reviews for old shoes
KelaBelle chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Wow, nice poem .
gg. lass chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
this is very cute.

i like the rhyming.

and the last stanza was definitely my favorite. i always get like that to, when i meet someone amazing i try to remember something about what i was wearing and pretend it's good luck ;]

yours until the wind changes,

dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Cute. Simple and really sweet.

Just a quick grammatical note: I think you meant "the" in the first line of the second stanza :)
dear maery chapter 1 . 7/22/2009

Cute ending.