aw...thats so cute...i love this story its amazing...you wrote it really good...i realy realy loved it!

~Thomas

OMG i'm crying, dammit! *wipes tears* seriously though. I want to go back to the beginning and read it over again! Urgh, such a wonderful story !

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I loved it ) It was so cute and sweet and wonderfully well written! Looking forward to your next works!

I hate being right (two minutes ago when I thought the end was soon) although I'm glad this chapter finally loaded.

This was a great epilogue. It covered the whole family, had a wedding and was simple and sweet.

I would love to see some spin-offs, although reading Redemption would, I suspect, sad despite knowing of the eventual happy ending.

I love happy endings!

Awesome, amazing, fantastic, wonderful... everything good!

Things I loved about this chapter: Barice being okay, Hesslin kicking ass (with fire!), the emotional scenes at the hospital (especially the bathroom), more closure on Hesslin's story, finally discovering the book, HxA.

Things I hated: it feels like the end will be coming soon *very sad face*, and chapter 21 seems to only exist in the drop-down menu :(

I must say this story has been one of my favorites. It was great tale of Hess and Africe and I hope their story will continue in some other form. As always Brilliant work!

Awesome chapter! Absolutely fantastic!

I really liked the flashback/dream, and the whole insight into Africe's job created by this whole mini-plot.

The best part was that Hesslin showed up to save the day. It's great cause we get to see him in all his awesomeness, and now maybe we'll get to learn even more about his past.

I knew Hess would get them out! I knew it! And I'm not kidding you when I jumped up and did a little happy dance! Good chapter! Really good! I love how you've given background info on Africe's past with his brother and his determination to get stronger. You've portrayed their emotions very well. Keep up the terrific work!

*blink*

that was...unexpected O

Hesslin was totally awesome 3

is he like an undercover super secret agent from a supersecret organisation? xD

Oh my god! I can't believe what dumb fucks these people are! How could they do that to Africe and Barice! I love your story by the way. It's another I couldn't stop reading once I started. When I read this chapter I was getting so ticked off and then when you had Africe dream about his dead brother I wanted to cry- which is something no story has ever gotten me to do! I hope you get published someday! Keep up the good work!

Thanks for the insight into their past, that was awesome.

You were right, I loathe them more than ever... are we sure they're not part of the slave trafficking ring or something?

And Barice better not die or you'll never hear the end of it... *threatening glare*

But I have to say you're doing a great job with the suspense and I'm liking being introduced to more of Africe's job.

You did a great job with the making up scene, not too fast, but it happened. Likewise the descriptions of the new cops were great... I loathe them already.

Your characters are so cute and funny, especially when they're embarrassed. As, always, I'm excited for more... I'll be so sad when this story ends.

Yikes... what a scary world. But you know, with these kinds of characters, it might be worth it. Awesome chappie - thanks!