Reviews for Mermaid
bloop chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
this story was amazing but if only we can have a different ending
elena chapter 7 . 3/26/2016
pls continue i'm dying to see what grandpa would do to sera
Guest chapter 7 . 12/30/2015
Dude you are so lucky that I am still reading this story. But still, 4 years.
Avatar Stark chapter 6 . 6/12/2011
This story could use continuing... (hint) ;)
authorLH chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Awesome story! :D
MarshmallowStarfish chapter 6 . 1/22/2011
I love this story! Please update please! I can't wait for more! )
Lorana chapter 6 . 3/12/2010
Great story so far, please continue.
nnn123 chapter 4 . 7/25/2009
still lovin' the story! keep writing, and i'll keep reading!
nnn123 chapter 3 . 7/23/2009
oh i'm such a sucker for love stories like this one! who cares if it's a little predictable? it's the way u tell it that matters, and so far, ur telling it pretty awesomely.
lenavis chapter 3 . 7/23/2009
alright, to be truthful, your writing itself isn't bad at all. the dialogue is good, as are the descriptions, but what's really getting to me here is the triteness of your plot. really, mermaid human? her saving him? it's all been a little bit overdone [eg THE LITTLE MERMAID]...and so far, it's all been extremely predictable. maybe branch out a little bit? C: