Reviews for Brown Eyes
ZyggyGirl chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Beautiful. I especially like it because I can indentify with it.
InfatuatedCritic chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Amazing poem. :)
KelaBelle chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
that was lovely x
rebeldork chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
This is a really odd poem, in my opinion. Not bad - just odd. There are a few small errors (you said "finali" but I think you mean "finale", that sort of thing). Sometimes I feel you might've changed the meaning of a line in order for it to rhyme and that gives it a slighthly awkward feeling (especially in the second stanza).

I do like it, though. I like the feeling that comes across, this almost selfless, eternal romance. The second time I read this, I imagined music with it, and I think it would work very well as a song, perhaps some kind of ballad. :)