Just... Just assesawwww

So what? If any girl comes to Michael (the maid) and David (Jennifer) they won't do anything to stop her because said girl doesn't take a no for an answer? Woah that's just f*cked up! Seriously, everything was fine till the part were they find David with Jennifer, then everything went downhill with this story.. There were so many ways to go, like Michael invites Jennifer to the wedding to make Zak jealous and Jennifer somehow fucks up the wedding (but everything is fine later), Zak is furious with Michael then he confess his feelings for her, etc... Anyway, you should fix this story a little since that part, so we could really see "love" is there somewhere... Thank you!

It's really bothering me that's all.

So I'm kind of confused, David almost cheated on his fiance because the other woman didn't take no for an answer? and also she straddled him and she didn't push her off? and I'm not clear about the "they lips are inches apart" where were his hands? and there's "they both looked up" so he's consenting in the act? I have this image that if he was not interrupted then david would've had sex with jennifer. I'm really confused, I would understand if his hand is in her shoulders trying to push her off and he's turning his head. so can someone make this clear?

I love the ending

Cute!

I love this!

how sweet

LOL oh gawd. isn't that like... blood... whatever? LOL you should had made michael's rachel's step brother instead. or something like that

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw! its so amazing! i loooveeveveveveev it ! probs my fav oneshot evers!

This was a sweet one shot. I enjoyed reading it a lot!

-ZH

Cute x]]

So cute, I liked it!

this was cuute!

but isnt it a little incesty...? i mean.. theyre already related and they got married..

Liked this one D

Except that Michael would do that to his sister