|Reviews for glass towers|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
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I love the opening to this. The wordplay of panes/pains was creative and a good eye-catcher. You have a lot of neat little twists and contrasts in this, which gives it a nice added dimension. I can tell you were really careful about your word choices.
You also had some interesting images. "Cascade of cracked
transparency" and "out glass tower was only spun sugar" were my favorites. Not only were they strong visuals, but they had interesting sentiments behind them.
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