Yeah so, I'm intrigued. Of course, I love most stories that have a sports storyline in them. I think you should continue.

I didn't notice any blaring mistakes, maybe a little one here or there, but I'm hardly an expert - take a look at my stories and you will see.

Anyway, I would like to see where you take this. I hope you continue.

This sounds like it has lots of potential. I've always liked wastching swimming, just suffered from being completely mediocre... and recreational. Look forward to seeing what you do with this.

Hey.. i wanna see where you're going with this :)

It sounds promising. hehe.

Sukanya

Interesting start! I can't wait to see what happens!