|Reviews for beautiful insomniac|
| michellemybelle chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
| ForeverInfinity chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Beautiful. Just freakin beautiful.
| punkgoesacoustic chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
I love this. Really, really love it. It hits all my word-obsessions (stardust, electricity, insomnia, Icarus complexes, stutter-stammer-stumble) and it's beautifully written. I love the parentheses in particular and the ending is spot-on.
| schizosophia chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
I just can't express just how completely, mind-blowingly perfect this piece is.
I feel truly and deeply honored that I have the opportunity to read your work.
| the rational hedgehog chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
It's so beautiful. I love it.
| chocolate and bananas chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Ah, poetry. It's hard to really say something concretely constructive to your work, because honestly speaking I don't know the technicalities for writing poetry, but I think [from my limited knowledge] this is an amazing poem.
Keep it up.
- chocolate and bananas.
| Shooting Star chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
| LaRocha chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
This poem is so chilling and gripping that I had to reread it to get a grip on how slippery and smooth the words fit toghether. The way you seperated the paragraphs and played with words "Be(lie)ving" "(In)(toxic)ation" "(Con)science gave your poem this spark that sets it apart.
Fluid. Your a poet. A damn good one. So good that this isn't just poetry it's art. Something so good that you taste it and see it and feel it and wish that you were there flowing through the tidal wave of perfect words.
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Love the sad celestial imagery you wrote so well here. :)
"where dreams are made of black holes and chaos, not stardust" - so far from trivial it's brilliant. :)
"icarus-complexes" - i always love conotations in things, especially well crafted imagery. I admire your talent. :)
| YasuRan chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
I could feel the narrator's obsession intensify with each word. The '(in)(toxic)ation' bit had me. If this poem says anything, it's that you're sheer genius with wordplay. The Icarus-complex is now my new favorite phrase/word. Thanks for posting this.
| SmashedIce.X chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Wow, this is actually fantastic! :)
| Channel 7 chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
| Noom chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
The imagery of this piece just beautiful! I particularly loved the 3rd and 4th stanzas. You're an incredibly talented writer :)
| LunarGirl chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
Wow. this is seriously one of the best poems i've ever read. I'm absolutely blown away by its depth and gripping qualities. excellent work!
| Nero Wolfe chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Love this powerful piece.