Reviews for The Whispers
MysticGypsyGirl chapter 7 . 8/27/2009
I thought that this was your best chapter yet! It had the perfect combination of mystery and romance. Rhea calling for Phoenix when she was scared was so romantic, and the mystery women made it so interesting! Keep up the good work!
MysticGypsyGirl chapter 6 . 8/18/2009
*Blinks* Love? Already? Whatever it's not my story. So anyhow, great chapter!
VampireAcademyDB chapter 6 . 8/17/2009
aw Update Soon! I LOVE Phoenix :D
Preet-ii 3 chapter 1 . 8/11/2009

yohh just letting you know i AM reading your stopries n this site ;) ahaa im gonna read it throughly now if im aloud cause its about to thunderstorm and my mom is pissing at me ofr going on 'electonics' when its lightening LOL

parents these days ehh ;)


pce lav yah
MysticGypsyGirl chapter 5 . 8/7/2009
I thought that it was another great chapter... But... What a weird family!
MysticGypsyGirl chapter 4 . 8/7/2009
I thought that it was a very interesting chapter! It was all described so well and sounded so beautiful! Keep up the good work!
fallhardforlove chapter 4 . 8/7/2009
I think this story is really awesome, one of the best stories on this whole site! Please continue writing, my favorite character btw is Darren he's funny and sounds totally cute
eszabela chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
it was pretty good, i think. you could do with some more commas, and end what peaople say with puncuation, but other than that i think you have a great start. yes, i think you should continue, just maybe have someone proof-read it before you publish. you could also talk about more of the details, spend more time describing things better. but truly, i think this chapter is pretty good.

MysticGypsyGirl chapter 3 . 8/5/2009
I’m in love with this story! It has mystery, action and romance. I can’t wait for the next update!
freya66 chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
I like it! You should keep going! ]