LOVE!

I really loved this a lot :) it was very well written and had me hooked till the end! Great job here!

? Guest, the author already gave a warning: NON-CON, it means nonconsensual.

This is tucked up. This is considered rape, you should've have put a warning you sick fucker!

So you know how almost every girl has a vampire fetish? Well I don't, my fetish is hot wealthy guys falling in love with poor adorable ukes. This one is definitely in my top ten. Oh and I bought your extended version of the fairy story, Come & Play. It is even better than the first version. You are a really good author. I love your work. :]

Really sweet story, thank you for sharing !

Very sweet yet sexy story. I enjoyed it c: Marshall was adorable.

cute

A really good story, short but welcoming to read. Thank you for it :-)

This is the best book i have read in a long time. It's amazing!

This was such a good story! It was wonderfully written.

Great story! :]

This story was absolutely amazing and I just wanted to say a quick thank you for writting and posting it!

Meow meow! –cling- This. story. was. AWESOME! –tackle- That said, on with the review! Tally-ho!

Okay okay, firstly Angel-bebe was just so cutie that I really could see his lil pouting face! And Simon-seme pissed me off till (almost) THE VERY END!0x0 –slaps bastard- I don’t know how you somehow twisted meh iron will! –lies- Okay, it was the whole lovey lovey thingy,but STILL! –flamey eyes- He was a real jackass takin’ Angel-bebe like that! –throws fist into the air proudly- I’m so happeh for Angel-bebe that he was able to throw those threats right back in the asshole’s FACE!*3* YEAH!

I felt that the whole lovey lovey thingy was extremely cutie and worthy of extra panda-action (which you presented without hesitation and I had, like, three heart attacks! I had to stop reading at one point or another and had to laugh nervously because I just couldn’t contain my JOY!) –flail-

-wiggle- I loved how Geb-mama and Robin-appa were totally there for Angel-bebe when he really needed people to hold onto and I laughed a little when Geb-mama immideatly went to get the ice cream when Angel-bebe came to their apartment at the almost end bit!X3 I wish I had someone like that!;-; -weeps- I can never find the ice cream when I need it!D’:

All of the panda-action (like I said before) was flippin’ awesome! And it was so awesome that it destractded meh! (no!) But I am no longer distractded! –drools while looking over story- OKAY! Uhmn, I’m not sure how much time passed between when Simon-seme was forcing himself into Angel-bebe’s moneymaker and when Angel-bebe was like ‘let’s do it! NAOW!’ –headtilt- But I felt that the transition was a little fast…-shrug- But I’m not complaining! –is distractded again-

At times like this I’m again wondering where the fuck Angel-bebe’s parents are? How old is he again? Who was this friend that bet him that he couldn’t win the contest? What was bet that he actually went onstage? So many questions! But…-drools- Again I am distractded! –flop- Whatever man, just do what you want! –cling- You are made of jeezus-awesome-rainbow-lovey-papier-mâché-bunny rabbits! You can do whatever you WANT! –wiggle-

I’ll have to read more of your stuff over my winter break! –petpet- Quite nice to meet you and your lovely writing style! –eyebrow wiggle- And your bebe’s! –clings plush-

-smooch-

-Alshmee

the story is so much better if we read its prequel featuring Robin and Geb in my opinion. however, I love Marshall. he's cute and i just love his strange logic.