Reviews for Arrow
Mrmonocle chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
A pretty neat piece. I like how you flipped it around at the end, as the the rest of the poem is in "Zen Master" mode. Some parts of the poem, towards the middle, seem to be a little to instructional for a poem. I'm talking about, "Hold it softly. String the bow, Hear the arrow click into place. Flip the bow back into proper position." and that might just be me. Good job!