Reviews for All His Fault |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed that, nice work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I. Loved. This. Ah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find it a little unbelievable, the whole scenario in general, but this was very fun. I'm very glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. It was cliche, but not cliche at the same time. I don't know how to explain it. Anyway, it was really cute and well written. Thanks for an entertaining 15 minutes or so...Haha, now I have to go do work. :) somuchformyhappyending |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job. :). Likeable characters, actual plot, some humour, almost-impeccable grammar... awesome story. :). |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, this was really cute ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So good! I love how the ending is not sappy and full of endless love declarations. The build up's really good. Erika's hated/dislike for Spencer is really believable (it's not the case in every I love to hate you stories), and that, I really enjoyed. I checked your profile page to see what else you've written - and I actually read "The Cleaner" and "James wants a puppy", and I really loved them too! (sorry for not reviewing them, though, I'm a lazy person LOL) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I love the plot :D One Shot, right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! loved the buildup! (: and Oliver :D and Spencer. xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Oliver the office cat. Just not as much as I loved Spencer and Erika. I completely believed that they fell in love and I enjoyed the spacing of the story. And of course the office gossip lol. Good job! ~Mia |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome ) It's getting more and more difficult for me to choose which one I prefer... Yours is definitely one of the best. Good luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was very well written. I think you did a great job with it! When I said addicted to a beverage, I didn't think anyone would use alcohol in their story, but I liked it! You can find this story in my c2, for voting. Good luck! ~Annoyance |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job with this one; I love this contest! |