Reviews for Gear hearts
rara saryn chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Good start. I noticed a few small errors:

behind them there - "behind" should have a capital (start of sentence)

as they primed there weapons - should be their

the soldier in the rear - "the" should have a capital

“your injured!” - should be "You're injured!"

just barley missing - should be; just barely missing