Reviews for We Feel
Prainey Boy chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Louie likes the peaches one. Real nice, I like the flow of the whole thing :)
lianoid chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Scissors are so sharp.

Do not ever run with them.

My eye has come out.

-Dang. That one caught me by surprise.

Hate myself always.

Knife plunges in and I bleed.

It feels way too good.

-Double dang. I love the last line especially.

This was a really interesting piece overall. The fact that you included several topics and then wrote a few lines about them was pretty neat. I don’t know how to take it as whole though, but then again, I’m terrible with poetry. Ha-ha. Wait, looking back these are haikus right? (I’m so dense sometimes). That explains why I don’t completely get it. Free verse I’m alright with. Rhyming I can do. Haikus? Goodbye. Ha-ha. I couldn’t write a haiku to save my life, I’m afraid. So now I’m super impressed that you cranked out so many. Excellent work Ran. –thumbs up–
Fleur-de-lis Evans chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
This collection of haikus flows well. Each idea seems to flow into the next without a gasp.

The most moving one is 'Cheater' and my favorite is 'Fly'.

Kudos on a great collection
Raingypsy chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Oh! I love them. Much better than my attempts!

I love Fly. I would love to be able to fly. And the last one. It's so true!

Good Job!