|Reviews for We Feel|
| Prainey Boy chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Louie likes the peaches one. Real nice, I like the flow of the whole thing :)
| lianoid chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Scissors are so sharp.
Do not ever run with them.
My eye has come out.
-Dang. That one caught me by surprise.
Hate myself always.
Knife plunges in and I bleed.
It feels way too good.
-Double dang. I love the last line especially.
This was a really interesting piece overall. The fact that you included several topics and then wrote a few lines about them was pretty neat. I don’t know how to take it as whole though, but then again, I’m terrible with poetry. Ha-ha. Wait, looking back these are haikus right? (I’m so dense sometimes). That explains why I don’t completely get it. Free verse I’m alright with. Rhyming I can do. Haikus? Goodbye. Ha-ha. I couldn’t write a haiku to save my life, I’m afraid. So now I’m super impressed that you cranked out so many. Excellent work Ran. –thumbs up–
| Fleur-de-lis Evans chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
This collection of haikus flows well. Each idea seems to flow into the next without a gasp.
The most moving one is 'Cheater' and my favorite is 'Fly'.
Kudos on a great collection
| Raingypsy chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Oh! I love them. Much better than my attempts!
I love Fly. I would love to be able to fly. And the last one. It's so true!