|Reviews for Aaron O'Conner|
| Aaerie chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
| Sapphyre Nymph chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
hm.. very nice..
| SmashedIce.X chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
I thought this was really good! :)
| ally chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
Hey sweetie! i really like this, i really do! but i was hoping we'd find out what really went on between aaron and jules.. especially from aaron's point of view.. other then that.. awesomeness!
| Bleucrystale05 chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Isn't it stacatto? not statacco? i dont know..XD
but i like the story though.. even though, yes, i dont think it stuck to the rules..XD
as a oneshot, i like it.. :]
| EchoedShadows chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
*claps* very nice
| mezzles chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Despite your uncertainty about the piece I thought it had a certain charm. I liked both of the characters: Aaron was perhaps a little hard to understand in his motives, but you can't give away too much without ruining the story.
A quick word misuse I noticed:
"...a heart, a soul, an actual conscious…or at least I thought you had one."
Conscious should, in fact, be conscience in this context. An easy mistake to make when attempting to get down fast flowing thoughts, I just thought I'd give you a heads up :)
Still, a nice read, and I enjoyed it!
| chasing givenchy chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Ooh, definitely a fun read, especially the opening. An open grave on Halloween? Ouch, the irony … and I like that Aaron didn't start off as chivalrous right off the bat, waiting to bait her before he tries helping her out. The part where he was biting back on the chivalry with his sprain was such an aww-moment.
But otherwise, that's not really a solid reason to fall in love with a person. Like and respect them after ages of enmity, definitely, but love? Too rushed, too fast. His breaking into her house with out-of-nowhere lock-picking skills was rather forced, as well, like the long romantic speech in the end, because I was left wondering where-did-all-that-come-from?
Including a bit more Juliette-Aaron interaction would have been good, instead of stuffing it entirely into the beginning and the end, which were overdeveloped if compared to the sketchy middle. But for an "I-love-to-hate-you" relationship, wow, she had a SOLID reason for hating him, and wow, he never does explain himself, does he?
| dwpea chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
This was really good as well although it ended rather rapidly..wished Aaron would explain himself ] But i still really like your stories!
| Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
I actually truly liked this, and the only part I didn't like all that much was the end (I would think she was still somewhat indignant at him and would not eagerly launch into a makeout session, but I suppose I may be wrong). Still, I did really love this (and think it was a pretty damn good oneshot), though I would like to point out you used "cubical" instead of "cubicle" at one point. But other than that, props to artistic dreamer for adding this to our c2. (:
| The Red Dress chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
this was really well written
but i wanted to beat the shit out of the main character.
Aaron is such a fucking ass.
He used her in high school.
and she forgives him because of one "I'm sorry" and no further explination is needed.
and then he lead her on again.
She seems like a weak willed loser.
but i hated both characters.
But VERY well written
| xxXNightsareDaysXxx chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Oh, no! You don't need to rewrite this-or at least, that's what I think...It's good, really..
| monotone rainbows chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
I thought this story was actually pretty good!
I love your other stories as well, although I haven't reviewed them since it was before I had an account, so think of this as a review on ALL your stories :)
| BeingMyself chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Catchy summary. Really liked the hate you had going on, Juliette had a good reason to dislike Aaron unlike in most stories. I wish Aaron had to explain his actions in past and present to her though before Juliette jumped him. It seems like he got off to easy, even if the story is a romance oneshot with word constraints.
| toffeecakesxox chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
how do you create the best guys anyway?
but they're all awesome, so i'll be stealing one soon enough :P
but now i want my own love story(:
i guess all girls do.