Reviews for why writers should never diet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is just a wonderful comparison. Nicely written to address a serious issue. I liked the ending especially. Favorite |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, amazing piece. The wording of this is so rich and descriptive that I was completely drawn into the words. Even though the lines were long, it read smoothly with seemingly no pause or hesitation. Not to mention how true your meaning is. I love the image of the last two lines. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, you've got some anger in this... I like what you have to say, there is something to be said - both of jealousy, and understanding - when a poet reads another poet's piece and allthey feel is contempt. You should that very well here. Writers by nature are harsh people, I think we have to be in order to understand and create life as we do. Much love, Juliet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. It sort of say to me, screw everyone who wants poety to be perfect. An excuse, if you will, for our imperfections. I like it. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very clever. You're still great. (Remember me?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() one of the few times i've laughed aloud while reading poetry. Favorite, because it's too truthful and far too witty to only be read once. A clever analogy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. So raw, as with most of your work it really captivates me. I liked the use of metaphors within this, the similarities drawn between 'dieting' to get the perfect figure and writing poetry. As always, amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so amazing, it renders me speechless. it's nice to have a little fat. muffin tops are going to come back in style. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's perfection in imperfection when it comes to poetry. And one of my favourite things about your poems have always been the analogies. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :), altho i have a hard time believing this much resembles your physique. but you never know. fairly often i accidentally start in the middle. i'll cut huge swathes and move them around like shuffling a deck of cards. i don't necessarily care too much for the compulsive preservation of the spacetime continuum when i'm sniffing out a new effect. but i do always edit the crap out of them, although this is probably seldom noticable; imagine how verbose they were in their earliest incarnations, with feet sprouting from shoulders and tongue trailing down around the toes... |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Never leave your poem bare or your body, to be fair." |
![]() ![]() ![]() this brought a smile to my face, because i know i could always work a little harder on each piece, but i just post it the way it is anyway. :) "love handles filled with awkward pauses and inappropriate juxtapositions," it just made me grin from the wit of it. :) |