This was interesting to read. I feel like the characters could be developed better, as at the moment they seem almost like placeholders for the gay jokes. However, being that this is a oneshot, you also don't have a lot of time to go into the characters, so it's easily overlooked. I think it would be beneficial to keep in mind that readers are not necessarily as familiar with the characters as you are, so we need a bit more background even in oneshots. With that being said, this was pretty amusing - also, I like the name Kiril. It's quite unusual.

Keep up the good work :)

that was cute and funny. Really love your writing style, it feels so natural.

I do love your work.

This is hilarious. xD

And, have you ever read the Vampire Chronicles by Anne Rice? This is not a weird, Twilight and vampires obsessed question, I just mean, when Kiril said: "I can't date David, he's taller than me," it made me flashback to Memnoch the Devil, one of the books, where a male character, Lestat, pretty much says the same thing about another character, David. xD

And I find strange things funny... _

Really cute one-shot! I loved it! Addison really made me laugh and I'm so happy that Kiril isn't gay :)

Hilarious. :)

I actually lol'd at parts. Which is rare for me.

Oh my god, I love it!

It reminds me so much of my sister and her gaydar (or lack thereof).

I want him to turn out to be gay just for the black comedy value.